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the price of silence

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crocodileo77
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0 posted 08-16-99 09:38 PM       View Profile for crocodileo77   Email crocodileo77   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit crocodileo77's Home Page   View IP for crocodileo77

silence

through the open window of of my being
I hear the ever present fanfare of life
echos of memories ring in my ears as the
clattering din of of future events horrifies and
pushes me forward

does this noise ever cease to be
does it ever receed into
silence

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1 posted 08-16-99 09:43 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

It does, friend, but not in a good way. Very well written.
elvira
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Welcome to the forums, croco
Nan
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Nicely done....
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I agree with Balladeer, nice job.
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