Haiku: Seasons of the Dove

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Haiku: Seasons of the Dove

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

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0 posted 1999-08-16 06:09 PM

Morning doves take wing
From their roosts in budding tree,
Harbingers of spring.

To ponds edge doves fly
In the heat of summer day,
Paintings in the sky.

Morning doves take flight
Over fields of ripened grain,
Autumn's fading light.

Doves huddled as one
On snowy winter morning,
Seeking warming sun.

[This message has been edited by Tim (edited 08-16-99).]

Terri
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since 1999-08-08

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Turtle Creek, PA

1 posted 1999-08-16 06:30 PM

How lovely!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 1999-08-16 06:33 PM

I've never seen continuing haiku, well done.

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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3 posted 1999-08-16 09:30 PM

HAIK-(1-2-3-4)U to the top!!

elvira
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since 1999-07-06

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California

4 posted 1999-08-16 09:45 PM

a quadruple haiku, and rhyming no less...i am most impressed !

Alwye

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In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-08-16 10:05 PM

Very beautiful!

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Sue
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since 1999-08-04

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France

6 posted 1999-08-17 02:53 AM

Impressive!

kaile