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Above The Wall

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pen of passion
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0 posted 08-16-99 05:45 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for pen of passion

Sometimes I sit here and think of you,
And wonder how you are,
I wonder if you're happy,
I wonder from afar.

I know that I should come closer,
But that isn't easy for me to do,
I'm sure you know the reason,
You and I are two.

So I sit here and wonder,
Will this wall ever fall,
Can our friendship grow strong,
And above all...tall.
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Your work is succinct and passionate - a nice addition to our forum.....
Poet deVine
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Very nicely done. I like the tentativeness in this one. I wrote about a wall once.. I'll try to dig it up an e-mail it to you.
Seymour Tabin
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Pen of Passion,
You write well. Big TU
pen of passion
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Thank you all for your comments, and making me feel welcome here.
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P.O.P. We can only try to make you feel welcome. Because you 'fit' you are welcome! Does that make sense....like Passions is a puzzle filled with many pieces. Because you fit you are part of us. .............
 
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