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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
But then and again, When ya look like me, A body well chiseled, Like you've never seen. A face so handsome, And angel like hair, With a muscle-bound abdomen, A complexion so fair. Personality and humor, A kindness so rare, Sexually perfect, The best anywhere. My legs are like trees, My arms are pure mass, A tongue that can please, A well shapened ass. And if for some reason, You do believe me, I've got an oceanfront mansion for sale, In east Tennessee! [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 08-16-99).] |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
What a pity that real beauty is all on the inside! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
LOL.....Ain't it the truth gal!!!!! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
yeah, Toe - lucky for you, too. 'Cuz, if I could post your 'Bubba' picture in here, the whole world would see you, and then you'd need every bit of that inner beauty - lol. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A visual treat That would dazzle all eyes, A chest built to nuzzle, Strong superb thighs, A delightful companion, An incredible heart - If you want perfection Our Toe fills the part! None could be finer... Of that, I've no doubt. He's the best a man could be Inside and out! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
we're not modest are we? lol...loved that little poem suthern wrote. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Toerag, my friend, I must concur You do look like a chiseler. Hidden behind your humorous quips Is a face that sank a thousand ships. Long John tells me you had no luck With that eleventh tummy tuck. The fat that they made disappear Lit Nova Scotia for a year! I wonder if you sat and cried The day that your hair finally dyed. Those great legs that you call a tree Would make an ostrich jump for glee! But hey, old friend, it could be worse. By Mother Nature you were cursed But you're the funniest man I've seen. How sad that looks aren't everything! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well, I had a good swoon when I read that first rhyme but after reading the rest I might change my mind There is so much more to a man than looks, there's money of course (kidding!). There is talent and brains...the two biggest turn on in the world for me! Show me your talent, dazzle me with your intelligence...I'll follow you anywhere! I liked your poem, but at first I thought you were describing Ron! |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
talk about shameless self-promotion, i thought i saw double at first with your name in the title and name column  signed plain jane |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
If only it were true.. Well at least, you have something on the inside right.. Since beauty is only skin deep anyway.. Love, Lady |
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