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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a

0 posted 1999-08-16 03:14 PM


I like that,
Sitting on the bathroom floor,
Watching you take a bath,
Talking to you.

I stuck my hand
In the water slowly
Moved my fingers along
The softness of your thigh.

I took handfuls of water,
Spilled them over your
Milk and silken shoulders,
Enjoying the gentle
Sensuousness of your skin
Slick with water.

You had your hair pinned up
In lovely disorder
To keep from getting it wet.
And you played as you talked,
Little splashes
With your fingertips.

Talking a bath,
I liked that,
And I don't even remember
Anything we said..

And then;

I wanted to billow
In your thighs
The sweet havoc
To burst beautiful
A moment in you...

Then, we could talk another bath!

Long conversations are nice....

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 08-16-99).]

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 08-16-99).]

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WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
1 posted 1999-08-16 03:24 PM


oohh, good one! What a romantic!
Sue
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since 1999-08-04
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France
2 posted 1999-08-16 03:39 PM


Long conversations are nicest when it doesn't matter what you say. I was touched by this poem.
suthern
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Louisiana
3 posted 1999-08-16 05:18 PM


A poem that leaves me sighing with wishes for long conversations... *S* Absolutely beautiful!
Carolina Girl
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since 1999-08-14
Posts 63

4 posted 1999-08-16 05:39 PM


I don't think I ever remember reading a romantic one of yours....and I think THIS one is very romantic, sensual...and just plain STEAMY!!! *fanning myself*
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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United Kingdom
5 posted 1999-08-16 05:43 PM


but where's the duck?????....oh, got it!..too busy floating...:-)))

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
6 posted 1999-08-16 05:52 PM


Grabbing Mr. Bubble......
Whew! Sensual, romantic...what more could ya ask for?

Terri
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since 1999-08-08
Posts 82
Turtle Creek, PA
7 posted 1999-08-16 05:52 PM


Well, as they say, cleanliness is next to godliness, eh Toe..(wink, wink, nudge,nudge)
Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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8 posted 1999-08-16 06:49 PM


Boy, when you said you were gonna keep it clean, I had no idea............

(very well done, btw)

elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
9 posted 1999-08-16 09:07 PM


okay Toerag, the romantic?, didn't anyone tell you about plagarizing? ...if anyone makes it to europe or has been there, you absolutely have to try those bath tubs, they are big enough for two, taking a shower together just doesn't compare
poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
10 posted 1999-08-17 12:09 PM


Oh I had no idea you had it in you!!! You can come scrub my back ANYTIME, now that I"ve read this ! Excuse me now - - (reaching for the Calgon)...............

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
11 posted 1999-08-17 07:30 AM


Lovely poem - it has all been said (I liked the form too by the way). I challenge you to bring it over to the Adult Forum with some 'adult' changes of course...perhaps extend the poem to include a little more....
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
12 posted 1999-08-17 07:38 AM


PD.....I have a zillion "naughty" poems...I usually tried to use them to make LongJohn look rediculous in some way or another....I'll wander over there soon and polish them up a tad and see what happens...most are of the "humorous" nature....(can ya imagine?)
Carolina Girl
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since 1999-08-14
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13 posted 1999-08-17 07:48 AM


Oh Toe!! Yanno the Adult Poetry is going to LOVE you!!! Course, I always was a BIG fan of your naughty poems!!!!
Toerag
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Ala bam a
14 posted 1999-08-17 07:51 AM


Yanno? I forgot that you, and Rainbow Girl, and Suthern and LongJohn have seen most of my God-Awful stuff?....
redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 480
Franklin, TN
15 posted 1999-08-17 07:59 AM


Ahhh but then what's a bathtub for? (smile)

Can we have a shower sequel please?

Very nicely done!
Excuse me
I have a bath to run...

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Kay-lynn
**A dream is a wish your heart makes :)


Lorelei54
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 458

16 posted 1999-08-17 08:17 AM


Very romantic and sweet Toe...
Now, tell LJA to post "his" bath poem...
it's along the same lines...hmmmm...shall I do it for him?
yep!

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