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Toerag
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Ala bam a


0 posted 08-16-99 03:14 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag

I like that,
Sitting on the bathroom floor,
Watching you take a bath,
Talking to you.

I stuck my hand
In the water slowly
Moved my fingers along
The softness of your thigh.

I took handfuls of water,
Spilled them over your
Milk and silken shoulders,
Enjoying the gentle
Sensuousness of your skin
Slick with water.

You had your hair pinned up
In lovely disorder
To keep from getting it wet.
And you played as you talked,
Little splashes
With your fingertips.

Talking a bath,
I liked that,
And I don't even remember
Anything we said..

And then;

I wanted to billow
In your thighs
The sweet havoc
To burst beautiful
A moment in you...

Then, we could talk another bath!

Long conversations are nice....

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 08-16-99).]

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 08-16-99).]
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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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1 posted 08-16-99 03:24 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

oohh, good one! What a romantic!
Sue
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2 posted 08-16-99 03:39 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Long conversations are nicest when it doesn't matter what you say. I was touched by this poem.
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


3 posted 08-16-99 05:18 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

A poem that leaves me sighing with wishes for long conversations... *S* Absolutely beautiful!
Carolina Girl
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4 posted 08-16-99 05:39 PM       View Profile for Carolina Girl   Email Carolina Girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Carolina Girl

I don't think I ever remember reading a romantic one of yours....and I think THIS one is very romantic, sensual...and just plain STEAMY!!! *fanning myself*
RainbowGirl
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since 07-31-99
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5 posted 08-16-99 05:43 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

but where's the duck?????....oh, got it!..too busy floating...:-)))

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Sally S.
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6 posted 08-16-99 05:52 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Grabbing Mr. Bubble......
Whew! Sensual, romantic...what more could ya ask for?
Terri
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7 posted 08-16-99 05:52 PM       View Profile for Terri   Email Terri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terri

Well, as they say, cleanliness is next to godliness, eh Toe..(wink, wink, nudge,nudge)
Balladeer
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8 posted 08-16-99 06:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Boy, when you said you were gonna keep it clean, I had no idea............

(very well done, btw)
elvira
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9 posted 08-16-99 09:07 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

okay Toerag, the romantic?, didn't anyone tell you about plagarizing? ...if anyone makes it to europe or has been there, you absolutely have to try those bath tubs, they are big enough for two, taking a shower together just doesn't compare
poetFemmeFatale
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10 posted 08-17-99 12:09 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh I had no idea you had it in you!!! You can come scrub my back ANYTIME, now that I"ve read this ! Excuse me now - - (reaching for the Calgon)...............

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"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


11 posted 08-17-99 07:30 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely poem - it has all been said (I liked the form too by the way). I challenge you to bring it over to the Adult Forum with some 'adult' changes of course...perhaps extend the poem to include a little more....
Toerag
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Ala bam a


12 posted 08-17-99 07:38 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

PD.....I have a zillion "naughty" poems...I usually tried to use them to make LongJohn look rediculous in some way or another....I'll wander over there soon and polish them up a tad and see what happens...most are of the "humorous" nature....(can ya imagine?)
Carolina Girl
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13 posted 08-17-99 07:48 AM       View Profile for Carolina Girl   Email Carolina Girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Carolina Girl

Oh Toe!! Yanno the Adult Poetry is going to LOVE you!!! Course, I always was a BIG fan of your naughty poems!!!!
Toerag
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Ala bam a


14 posted 08-17-99 07:51 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yanno? I forgot that you, and Rainbow Girl, and Suthern and LongJohn have seen most of my God-Awful stuff?....
redwriter1
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15 posted 08-17-99 07:59 AM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

Ahhh but then what's a bathtub for? (smile)

Can we have a shower sequel please?

Very nicely done!
Excuse me
I have a bath to run...

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Kay-lynn
**A dream is a wish your heart makes :)

Lorelei54
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16 posted 08-17-99 08:17 AM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

Very romantic and sweet Toe...
Now, tell LJA to post "his" bath poem...
it's along the same lines...hmmmm...shall I do it for him?
yep!
 
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