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Wondering Why?

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Mark R.
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0 posted 08-16-99 02:17 PM       View Profile for Mark R.   Email Mark R.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mark R.


My heart wonders why you left,
How you could say you loved me?

Deep inside my soul yearns to be free,
My eyes....to see.

My body longs for your embrace,
My lips....your taste.

My heart beckons this love, I not waste,
My mind convinces, that I leave in haste.

"What did I do to deserve this!?"
I felt our hearts meld with our first kiss.
"Did it not send you into eternal bliss?"

I realize, that it was fate,
And that for me; it is now too late.
I am not filled with love; rather hate,
And all I can do now is just wait....

....For me to break this invisible seal,
And to be confident that in time my heart
to....
Will heal....
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Sue
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1 posted 08-16-99 04:06 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Hard decisions can make very good poems.
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 08-16-99 10:52 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

"My lips - your taste"....I really loved this line, dear Mark....Beautiful & sensual , yet so sad....wonderful piece you have here......Bravo....!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

moonmoon
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Yes, YES...Sad but so well written Mark...I sure could relate..

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within." Amelia E. Barr

Poet deVine
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4 posted 08-17-99 07:26 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Mark, this is very good! I liked the last stanza the best......here's to healing!
passing shadows
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healing takes forever sometimes
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