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Why it took so long

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The Jackal
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since 08-13-99
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0 posted 08-16-99 02:02 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

im not so special you know,
im so ordinary,
just another man,
living life,
without a foolproof plan,
yet i dont take risks,
thats why im alone,
here in my pit,
where i throws fits,
about what went wrong,
why i took so long,
to tell my love,
my sad,sad song,
to hold her close,
and to love her most



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poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
Arkansas


1 posted 08-20-99 09:25 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Sometimes you wonder which is the greatest of two evils....taking risks with love, or sitting alone in the rooms of your life - knowing you're safe, yet very cold.....? You don't know how many times I've played this game with myself....It's hard either way you choose....good luck my friend! I like how your poems evoke a certain thought from the reader, that's what gets me rambling on so about it!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

 
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