I'm not too sure about the second stanza, either, but I don't have any suggestions, I'm afraid - I'm not too clear on what you were trying to say. In the sixth I would suggest that "But I'll be always there" instead of "But I will always be there" might improve the flow. The rest I really loved.
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
You cannot change "....I will always be there" to "....I'll always be there" without altering the syllable count and creating a mismatch with the first line. I think "and" in front works better than "but".
Member Rara Avis
Thanks to all for your help. I will change the "but" to "and." I chuckle when I look at this. I have finally decided just to leave out that stanza all together. After all we went through to make it fit. I really do appreciate all the help!!!