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Nightmare lake

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The Jackal
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0 posted 08-16-99 01:10 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

The lake now lies still,
beyond the moonlight,
so evil so corrupt,
it swallowed my love,
as i stood on the bank,
worthless and vunerable,
the sun gives me no comfort,
cant hide the past,
cant burn my eyes,
i see her eternally in my mind,
so close but always far away,
lost in the pain of watery dread,
i would take her place among the swampy shore,
im lost without my light,
if only god would end my plight


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elvira
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free verse with a rhymed ending, most interesting
Alwye
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Yes, quite interesting..but it seems to work, for I liked this!

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