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Open Poetry #1

Forgive Me

Carolina Girl
Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 63

0 posted 1999-08-16 12:44 PM

Hurtful words flew out of my mouth,
Before I could even stop.
I now realize what I said was wrong
From trying to remain on top.

If I could erase your memory
Of words that burn with pain,
I'd try with the strongest eraser
Ridding any trace that remains.

Your forgiveness I ask in sincerity
And I'm hoping you'll think twice
Before you answer I don't think so-
Just please follow my own advice.

It's not worth a grudge to hold
For it eats you in the end.
Forgive, move ahead, look forward.
Don't look back - begin again.

[This message has been edited by Carolina Girl (edited 08-16-99).]

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

1 posted 1999-08-16 04:48 PM

Car Girl

This was great! This is the Car Girl I remember from before. Great job, lil one. It is always better to forgive, because the pain stops when the forgiving begins.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-08-16 05:19 PM

This was nice! Quite good advice! Always better to forgive, even tho' it's not always so easy.

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

3 posted 1999-08-16 05:35 PM

CG

Grudges are a waste of time
energy and love...
much better to follow your advice
as many often do

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-18 04:37 AM

wish it were that easy sometimes

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