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Forgive Me

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Carolina Girl
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0 posted 08-16-99 12:44 PM       View Profile for Carolina Girl   Email Carolina Girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Carolina Girl

Hurtful words flew out of my mouth,
Before I could even stop.
I now realize what I said was wrong
From trying to remain on top.

If I could erase your memory
Of words that burn with pain,
I'd try with the strongest eraser
Ridding any trace that remains.

Your forgiveness I ask in sincerity
And I'm hoping you'll think twice
Before you answer I don't think so-
Just please follow my own advice.

It's not worth a grudge to hold
For it eats you in the end.
Forgive, move ahead, look forward.
Don't look back - begin again.



[This message has been edited by Carolina Girl (edited 08-16-99).]
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LngJhnAg
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1 posted 08-16-99 04:48 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Car Girl

This was great! This is the Car Girl I remember from before. Great job, lil one. It is always better to forgive, because the pain stops when the forgiving begins.
WhtDove
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2 posted 08-16-99 05:19 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was nice! Quite good advice! Always better to forgive, even tho' it's not always so easy.
RainbowGirl
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3 posted 08-16-99 05:35 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

CG

Grudges are a waste of time
energy and love...
much better to follow your advice
as many often do

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


passing shadows
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4 posted 04-18-2004 04:37 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

wish it were that easy sometimes
 
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