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Looking Glass

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la hac' awwni
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Euless, Tx, 76039


0 posted 08-16-99 10:47 AM       View Profile for la hac' awwni   Email la hac' awwni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for la hac' awwni

Lookin' through the window
tonight-the rain streakin'
the glass, I was thinkin'
of you. Thoughts of what you
looked like, of what you've become
and what we would say to each other
flooded my mind.
Left my room and walked
outside in the rain to clear
my brain. The shiny rainy
streets were deserted and
occasionly a car sprayed by.
The clouds hung low over the
darkened buildings, weeping.
Looking at the closed store windows,
your reflection looked back at me.
A raindrop driped into my eyes and the
image of you disappeared.


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poohbear
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1 posted 08-16-99 11:01 AM       View Profile for poohbear   Email poohbear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poohbear

very thought provoking...who were you referin to ??? your inner self??? part of you you hve missed???
la hac' awwni
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2 posted 08-16-99 11:08 AM       View Profile for la hac' awwni   Email la hac' awwni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for la hac' awwni

Thanks poohbear, it's part of a running 2 year email discourse with a friend.

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la hac' awwni
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Thanks poohbear, it's part of a running 2 year email discourse with a friend.

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la hac' awwni
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Thanks poohbear, it's part of a running 2 year email discourse with a friend.

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