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No Other Man

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Lost Dreamer
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No Other Man

The rays of sun
illuminated,
captured
upon your delicate
smooth face.

The soft innocence
crying,
yearning
to be caressed
with gentle fingertips.

A kiss given
tenderly,
lovingly
to your soft,
sweet lips.

No other man
could,
would,
delight me
as much as you.
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Lovely. Simply told it makes a powerful statement!
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Thank You ever so much, Poet deVine. I just wrote this, this morning, so my husband has not been given an eye shot of it yet.
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....makes me smile
Michael
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I found this piece soft, delicate,
and touching.

Nicely done.

Michael
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Your hubby may not have seen the poem, but I'm sure he knows the feelings behind it. Lucky fellow.
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Nan: Smiles are good, glad you liked it.

Michael: Thank-you, very much.

Balladeer: A giant smile appeared upon his face, while reading this. Thanks for your kind words.

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