Member Rara Avis
Well done Sue, and very powerful!
Suggestion: try to break up the longer phrases, the disembodied electronic voices is a little hard to swallow in one gulp. Maybe try splitting it up a little.
I sit here alone and hear
the disembodied electronic
of unknown correspondants...
Just a constructive criticism on my part, though I'm definitely no eggspurt!
It's so cool, it's so swell, living here on Ice Planet hell!
[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 08-17-99).]