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connie New Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 5houston texas |
tootsie that old bed was cozy with you there all that hair and your nose in my ear so soft.. the sound of your feet as they challenged that newly waxed floor slidin all the way to the patio door.. i miss that. sarge..the coward that he was thunder claps were not his forte'.. his refuge was between the bathtub and comode i guess to him that seemed the safest place. i guess i miss you both. connie haynes gill 8-15-1999 |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Warm and heartfelt. Made my ears tickle ... ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is really really nice, and it flows so well. Great imagery - and it's hard to lose a pet you love isn't it? |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Enjoyed your poem.Happy writing. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
Welcome to the forums, connie  |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
You make me love your dogs, too. Well done! |
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