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connie
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since 07-31-99
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houston texas


0 posted 08-15-99 11:23 PM       View Profile for connie   Email connie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for connie

tootsie

that old bed was cozy with you there
all that hair
and your nose in my ear
so soft..
the sound of your feet
as they challenged that newly waxed floor
slidin all the way to the patio door..
i miss that.
sarge..the coward that he was
thunder claps were not his forte'..
his refuge was between the bathtub and comode
i guess to him that seemed the safest place.
i guess i miss you both.


connie haynes gill 8-15-1999
© Copyright 1999 connie - All Rights Reserved
Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


1 posted 08-16-99 12:23 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Warm and heartfelt. Made my ears tickle ...

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")
Severn
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2 posted 08-16-99 12:24 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is really really nice, and it flows so well. Great imagery - and it's hard to lose a pet you love isn't it?
Delores Hall
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3 posted 08-16-99 12:35 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Enjoyed your poem.Happy writing.
elvira
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4 posted 08-16-99 02:13 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

Welcome to the forums, connie
Sue
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5 posted 08-16-99 02:27 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

You make me love your dogs, too. Well done!
 
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