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christies heart
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0 posted 08-15-99 11:12 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for christies heart

BETRAYAL IS CARVED IN A CRACKED WINDOW PANE;
A TOUCH OF ARSNIC IN THE FINEST CHAMPAGNE.
BETRAYAL SLEEPS IN MOMENTS OF LUST;
IT'S A CHINK IN THE ARMOR OF ALL THAT WE TRUST.

BETRAYAL IS NOT WHAT I DO TO YOU.
IT'S A BRILLIANT RAINBOW IN STORMS THAT ARE NEW.
BETRAYAL IS NOT WHAT WE DO AT ALL;
IT'S THE BUILDING OF TOWERS FOR THE SAKE OF THE FALL.
© Copyright 1999 Christine R - All Rights Reserved
Sue
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1 posted 08-15-99 11:28 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Betrayal is a symptom of total indifference, betrayers often don't even notice that they are doing it! I liked the poem.
Craig
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2 posted 08-16-99 01:05 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

On occasion a well written poem accidentally slips past the usually eager eyed members of this site, passing with little comment. It is not done on purpose, it is usually a consequence of the number of good poems being posted and is generally rectified in time by being found and sent back to the top, to receive the comments it deserves.

This is such a poem, and I am sending it back up for another try.

Craig



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poohbear
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welcome to the grop this is a nice piece and so true look forward to reading more of your work
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