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The Mold of me

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christies heart
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0 posted 08-15-99 11:00 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for christies heart

Desending on those words, unsaid
with wings of passion, eyes of dread.
Look through shadows on the wall;
tempt the lightening, so trees won't fall.

Utter precisely a "yes" or "no",
forgetting the layers that linger below.
Pose me pretty on the witness stand;
argue a case with your head in the sand.

It's simple and certain you'll win a fight
focusing frienzied on the black and white.
Yet what of the truth that logic must play
when catptured complexity is locked away?

What am I now in this tired old shell?
The hand made mold of what you must sell.
A characature, a cut and paste role
is all that is me when you forfiet my soul.
© Copyright 1999 Christine R - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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I related to this one. My friend is going through a simular situation. Thank you!
Craig
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Nan
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Smiles.....
Lost Dreamer
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Great Job. , and Welcome
Poet deVine
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I really liked this one...especially the last line. You will have to watch out for a response from our 'resident lawyer' though, he may have a rebuttal! I now saunter off to read more of your work!
passing shadows
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wow!

where have you gone? come back and write more!
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