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All alone again...

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Matt
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0 posted 08-15-99 07:12 AM       View Profile for Matt   Email Matt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Matt

When I saw you standing there
The wind blowing freely through your hair
That untroubled smile gracing your face
Denying me the power to flee this place

Comparing you to a mere earthly flower
Doesnít expose your beautyís full power
You should be compared to a heavenly star
At least that states just what you are

So forgive me now if Iím bothering you
I always hoped you loved me too
I only wanted a chance to stay
Alongside you and wash the tears away

So remember me as you walk away
As all I do is sit here and cry
As you live enjoying yourself
Iím having trouble saying goodbye

I was born to love you!


[This message has been edited by Matt (edited 08-16-99).]
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Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 08-15-99 09:09 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Matt, Very nice job, I love the last line "I was born to love you"
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 08-15-99 12:08 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Matt, I've read stuff like this before, but you did a good job.
Poet deVine
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3 posted 08-15-99 12:11 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome sir to the family! If you use the edit button (with the pen) you can change this line:
I always hoped you loved myme? too

Nicely done! I loved your way with words here..'denying me the power to flee'..great phrase!

thursdayschild
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4 posted 08-15-99 09:54 PM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

How could any woman resist
a declaration such as this?
Nice Matt....
DarkChiild
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5 posted 08-16-99 12:59 AM       View Profile for DarkChiild   Email DarkChiild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DarkChiild

I envy you.. I'm miserable at writing the mushy stuff. But good job, it was well expressed


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Nan
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6 posted 08-16-99 08:07 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is very nicely done, Matt...Keep 'em coming...
passing shadows
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7 posted 04-18-2004 04:39 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nicely done...very romantic!
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