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Spirit of the Song

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~one voice~
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0 posted 08-15-99 03:55 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

Such beauty in the spirit of the song,
Like tiny angels flighting thousandfold-
Like gold in love’s first kiss that wakes the dawn.

And such a voice does not know right from wrong,
Reaching out for meaning to keep hold-
Such beauty in the spirit of the song.

Ensculpting images in flight along,
this voice cannot render what it is told-
like gold in love’s first kiss that wakes the dawn.

'Tis ever-changing yet, so very calm,
The paintings in the mind are strong and bold-
Such beauty in the spirit of the song.

Each word this voice sings lingers on and on...
Love’s measured in incense and in gold-
like gold in love’s first kiss that wakes the dawn.

N’er there were alterations that were wrong.
Feeling takes upon those much too cold.
Such beauty in the spirit in the spirit of the song,
Like gold in love’s first kiss that wakes the dawn.

©1999 Erin Solari


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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


[This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 08-15-99).]

[This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 08-17-99).]
© Copyright 1999 ~one voice~ - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 08-15-99 04:32 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Very well done. Beautiful imagery.

Michael
Severn
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2 posted 08-15-99 05:14 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow - this is so cool
It flows like the melody I can almost hear in your work!
~one voice~
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3 posted 08-15-99 06:41 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you so much, Michael and Severn!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Sue
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4 posted 08-15-99 01:50 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Beautiful, thank you.
Nan
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5 posted 08-15-99 02:03 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

OK - one voice - check out the Analysis Forum for my overview.....
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6 posted 08-15-99 02:28 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

One voice, this is great! A villanelle is difficult to tackle for anyone and you breezed through it with ease. Very, very nice job!
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 08-15-99 03:07 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Agree with balladeer you did a great job.
~one voice~
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8 posted 08-15-99 07:11 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you so much...all of you! Nan, on my way...

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Alwye
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9 posted 08-16-99 12:24 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, very beautiful!! I loved the imagery!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood
~one voice~
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10 posted 08-16-99 02:51 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you, Alwye!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


wayoutwalt
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11 posted 08-17-99 04:10 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

this is very good miss one and only and to see its in a restricted form yuh it makes it better that i couldnt tell
DreamEvil
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12 posted 08-18-99 03:49 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Wonderful work, my dear. I'm watching you grow as a poet with avid interest.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


~one voice~
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13 posted 08-19-99 05:00 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you, thank you... I am proud of this piece... I worked extra hard on it. Thanks all of you!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


 
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