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Nightstalker

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Alicat
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since 05-23-99
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0 posted 08-14-99 11:45 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

Nightstalker


I walk through the grass
The air is sickly sweet
Noone else is here
Mist swirls around my feet
My pain is growing worse
I need to slake my thirst
My life is over
But it's gonna get much worse

Trapped within this withered shell
I live out my undead hell
Rising nightly from the grave
To your blood I am a slave

Coming down the avenue
A lovely lady comes in view
I draw her close with mystic eye
She doesn't know it's time to die

Swift bite, dark red
Hold her close, tilt her head
Grip her tight, hear her moan
Feel the snap of broken bone

Hear her heartbeat slowing down
Let her drop onto the ground
Now I've fed, time to play
I throw her down an alleyway

Trapped within this withered shell
I live out my undead hell
Rising nightly from the grave
To your blood I am a slave

I walk through the grass
The air is sickly sweet
Noone else is here
Mist swirls around my feet
My pain is growing more
I need to slake my thirst
My life is over
But it's gonna get much worse


Alicat


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elvira
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since 07-06-99
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1 posted 08-14-99 11:49 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

take me...take me!!!
i'll even bare my neck for thee
i do so enjoy a good vampyre poem...well done Alicat
Alicat
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since 05-23-99
Posts 4277
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2 posted 08-15-99 01:11 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Childe, thy offer has been considered and found worthy of blood tainted reality. Come close once more and I shall lead thee unto thy rest.

Alicat

And the angels were silent and wept bloody tears.
Sue
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since 08-04-99
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France


3 posted 08-15-99 01:35 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Great poem!
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
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4 posted 08-15-99 01:55 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Wow! I really like the way you portrayed this night stalker. Absolutely a fantastic job! They don't know it's their time to die, you could really feel this one.
Nan
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5 posted 08-16-99 07:43 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Geesh - we don't see any new work from you for awhile - and when we do, you just miss the new forum opening by a few brief hours....
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
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6 posted 08-16-99 10:50 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wowee!! I'm nearly scared ****less with this one! Yikes! This is certainly "different"....I'm turning the lights on now.....I'll be right back......(heading for the lightswitch)

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

aziza
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7 posted 06-11-2007 12:06 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

Whoa!
Creepy and wonderful
Good poetry.

A
Artic Wind
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8 posted 11-12-2007 09:13 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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