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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-08-14 09:37 PM


Say what

You say our love was born,
Back on a summer morn,
Inside a small cafe,
We spent that first day.

And there I spoke your name,
A sound that struck a flame,
Inside your beating heart,
And that the very start?

I can see the small cafe,
And can feel that summer day,
But I feel our love was born
Only after I had sworn.

That you and only you,
Would be my love in true.
That I would forever stay
And never ever stray.

Now let us both be real
Was not that the oatmeal?

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 1999-08-15 08:49 AM


Well, Sy - Oatmeal does stick to your ribs, they say....
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-04-13 11:44 PM


Sy....I very much enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-04-15 11:57 AM



Now just look how empty the blue walls were the day you penned this one...

but I'll bet this will garner a lot of attention now that it's twinkling bright!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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4 posted 2003-04-15 01:39 PM


I see Sunshines been digging up old treasure chests...and I know someone who is a fan of oatmeal who I'll let know this is here
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2003-04-20 09:02 PM


JM sent this gem to me, and I do happen to be a fan of oatmeal, but only after it's congealed
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