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Take care of those you love

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 08-14-99 09:22 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Silently I weep
for the dreams
I'm unable to keep
alive!
I loved you dearly
and gave you my all
but step by step
you trod on it all..
I told you
time and time again
if you don't treasure
this love
some day soon
there will be none left at all...
ignore this you did
and life carried on
and then one day
I summoned the courage
to say...
I need a new life
to live apart in my new day
and so we parted...
Today
our home was valued
someday soon, others will share
our home,
where once we watched the moon
Do I feel sad?
yes
Are we friendly
yes...
sad thing is
you want me so much
now that I am gone..
You keep asking...
do I have to go?
and I keep saying
I need to sleep alone..
I don't have the heart
to tell you again
my love for you has died
and now I love another
but today, for us, I cried!

Take care of those you love
and tell them every day
show them your love
in every single way
for then they may believe,
that loving you is all
and you will never be alone
because love is all we need....

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 08-14-99).]
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WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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1 posted 08-14-99 09:38 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well done! Very touching and quite truthful.
RainbowGirl
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2 posted 08-14-99 10:40 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thanks...It's been a rough day...so much love has gone into the building of this home and it's value, takes none of that into account..it's purely based on location and view...when I think back, I thought this would be the place that I died in...and to a certain extent, that is true and yet I live on...and now I look for my cottage...where I and Snoops can live in peace...apart from his presents...lol

Anyone for mouse pie?..Mole pie, Rat pie or ...YUK!!!! Rabbit pie....nope...I just have to rescue all this wildlife and Snoops will just have to eat Whiskas.. ,,OK, maybe a little chicken or steak...cause I love him...*G*

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Craig
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3 posted 08-15-99 07:16 AM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

Looking forward is a lot easier, and sometimes a lot better than looking back, I hope you find whatever it is you are looking for in your new home.

HUSG
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4 posted 04-18-2004 04:43 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

great wisdom
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