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tulip
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since 1999-07-04
Posts 320
unknown

0 posted 1999-08-14 05:44 PM


I see you with the other girls
You chat alot with all those curls.
But when I see you look at me
There's something there, what could it be?
When I walk on by your side,
You make a comment that sends a tide
Right through my heart
that's open wide,
You twist the feelings deep inside.
But everytime we have a chance,
You hesitate, and throw that glance.
What do you want, I have'nt a clue,
Please, talk to me, and don't go hide,
I'm waiting, it's up to you,
I will not hesitate, unless you do.

© Copyright 1999 tulip - All Rights Reserved
elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
1 posted 1999-08-14 09:27 PM


nothing wrong with taking the first step, tulip...give it a try, it's quite liberating
tulip
Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320
unknown
2 posted 1999-08-15 12:46 PM


Scary, Elvira!
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 1999-08-15 01:03 PM


Tulip,
The first try at anything is scary. Nice one.

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