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I'm Waiting For You

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tulip
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0 posted 08-14-99 05:44 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

I see you with the other girls
You chat alot with all those curls.
But when I see you look at me
There's something there, what could it be?
When I walk on by your side,
You make a comment that sends a tide
Right through my heart
that's open wide,
You twist the feelings deep inside.
But everytime we have a chance,
You hesitate, and throw that glance.
What do you want, I have'nt a clue,
Please, talk to me, and don't go hide,
I'm waiting, it's up to you,
I will not hesitate, unless you do.
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elvira
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1 posted 08-14-99 09:27 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

nothing wrong with taking the first step, tulip...give it a try, it's quite liberating
tulip
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Scary, Elvira!
Seymour Tabin
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Tulip,
The first try at anything is scary. Nice one.
 
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