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My Ache For the Blade

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-14-99 03:16 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Forgive my fledgling attempts at this free verse thing. I'm posting this in CA as well.


I cast
longing glances
at the blade
awestruck by it's
simple beauty.
Each loving caress
of the constant
unchanging
hardness of the knife
moves my icy soul to a more perfect
marriage with the blade.
My lips touch this loyal and
worthy
partner in what presages
an act of primal
union with this
jealous lover.
A quick, unfeeling motion
grants me her
kiss
an ecstasy of anticipated
delight
brought on by her gentle touch
that tenderly
sliced into my flesh.
With near sexual release
her kiss
eases my ache
for the blade.


©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©




[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 08-14-99).]
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Dragoness
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1 posted 08-14-99 03:51 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Nice free verse.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
Gentle Soul
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2 posted 08-14-99 04:11 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

*hugs* Im just glad you are ok brother..

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thursdayschild
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3 posted 08-14-99 04:35 PM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

forgive you, for this? think I'll thank you
instead! Awesome work, thanks.
Alwye
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4 posted 08-14-99 10:29 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I'd say this is a pretty darned good free verse, my friend!! (I wish I could do this well). Keep it up!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood
Ominous
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5 posted 08-14-99 11:14 PM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

What a greeat job Dream.
Never underestimate what you are capable of.
~one voice~
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6 posted 08-15-99 01:55 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Like I said, love, you write what you feel...and you express yourself so very beautifully! Wonderful job!!!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


DreamEvil
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7 posted 08-16-99 02:15 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Guarded thank you, I'll see how it faired in CA next.
DreamEvil
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8 posted 08-18-99 03:46 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I'll be posting this in Dark as well. After conferring with the powers that be in the morning, I might be deleting this from here.
Michael
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9 posted 08-18-99 05:55 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Very intense piece.
Definately appeals to the darkside.

Michael
WhtDove
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10 posted 08-18-99 01:21 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well done my friend!

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 08-18-99).]
 
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