I'm going to be honest here - first I love the poem - second, when you first started posting, you put about 6 new poems onto the forum at once...I read a couple as I try to get the newbies on their first day and welcome them. I could not read all 6 at that time..it's unfortunate that this happens a lot....the poems move so quickly here - wait until you hear how many people access the site! It's hard to stop and read each poem and sometimes, gems get lost in the shuffle.
That's why it's also a good idea, once in awhile, to go back a few pages and find the poems that no one responded to and read them, if you like them, reply and send it to the top for us to find...as PFF did.
Your work is great, by the way. It's exciting to see so much talent here!