Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
Hey Megs - Welcome
Any sonnet writer is a welcome addition here... Your rhyme scheme is perfect, and your iambic pentameter is close... I'll take some time to critique it for ya.....
Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75