its beating on my mind again, where is the hollow friend, i want that craving, makes me feel small, thrown around someones rag doll, but im in heaven, hell's release, no more chains,no more leash, i can breathe,and im alive, nothing kicking me inside, the power of love, has found me dead
Welcome to the forums. I don't think I've seen your post before...
This is a dynamic piece. I particularly like the phrase "beating on my mind again". Other lines stand out for me, also: "but I'm in heaven/hell's release" and the last lines, "the power of love/has found me dead"
Very interesting and powerful work. Thanks for posting. I'll look forward to reading more.