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mister61
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bergen county, nj


0 posted 08-13-99 03:45 PM       View Profile for mister61   Email mister61   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mister61

In your eyes
I see the past
Pain and puzzle
Tears and torment

In your smile
I see a light
That splits the dark
A breathtaking beacon

In your voice
Angels crying
Beauty abused
A silent symphony

In your touch
I feel the fear
Longing to let go
Clutching compassion

In your arms
Reaching and wrenching
For tomorrow's hope
With bygone betrayals

In your heart
Love everlasting
Pure in its pleasure
Aglow in its goodness

In your soul
I see a place
Of sweetness and grace
And welcoming warmth

In you alone
I see the years
Unfolding and flowering
With love everlasting

In all these things
I see one life
Two puzzles together
A portrait complete
© Copyright 1999 Harris Fleming - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


1 posted 08-13-99 03:48 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! This is lovely writing! I look forward to more from you.
Nan
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2 posted 08-14-99 08:17 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very nice, indeed...


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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ 1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75


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on the threshold of a dream


3 posted 08-14-99 10:12 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

In your poem... I see talent! *G* Great job!
mister61
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bergen county, nj


4 posted 08-15-99 04:39 PM       View Profile for mister61   Email mister61   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mister61

Thanks for the notes - they're appreciated!
 
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