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I Am All Alone

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~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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Billings, MT USA


0 posted 08-13-99 03:33 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

Will someone please explain to me
just what I need to know?
I look for answers carefully,
but none do seem to show.
When itís love that you would die for,
just where is it you go,
when One you love betrays you more
than you would like to know?

Could someone please shed light on me
and let me know whatís real?
Iíve been betrayed so truthfully-
I donít know how to feel.
Wondering if itís another...
it bites upon my heel.
Iím a wife and Iím a mother-
Iím losing what is real.

Where does he go in dead of night?
Where is he when I wake?
Why is it I go through this fright?
Did I make a mistake?
Perhaps, some day I will find trust
if my life He should take.
For now, Iíll do just what I must.
From nightmares I will wake.

These dreams of madness keep me sane.
I lie in bed alone.
Like raindrops on the window pane,
I fall to earth and stone.
I roll in mud, the filth and muck.
I hear the gentle drone.
I find that I am all but stuck.
And I am all alone.

©1999 Erin Solari


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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


© Copyright 1999 ~one voice~ - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 08-13-99 03:49 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I'm sorry, my dear. I have few answers, only a dry shoulder and an open heart to offer.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©


~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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Billings, MT USA


2 posted 08-13-99 06:44 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you, Dream.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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3 posted 08-13-99 07:48 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Would that I could answer, but I can not for such questions I've never had to ask and such answers I've never had to seek. I only hope your offering here is far from the truth of your life... if not, then you have my support within these poetic halls. My best to you as you have shown your best here. Thanks for sharing.
Balladeer
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4 posted 08-13-99 07:53 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You must find the answers yourself, one voice, but, if it is any consolation, you are not alone. You have family here.
Poet deVine
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5 posted 08-13-99 08:37 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

It's nice to see a poet progress in writing style. You get better with each posting. I admire you for sharing your inner most private thoughts with us.
Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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6 posted 08-13-99 11:57 PM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

I wish I had a answer for you.
~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA


7 posted 08-14-99 01:58 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I must thank you all! And Poet deVine, such praise from you is ego-boosting! Thank you.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Christopher
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since 08-02-99
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Purgatorial Incarceration


8 posted 08-14-99 03:04 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

You're never truly alone, as long as there's love in your heart to give! And it seems to me that since you're searching for an answer, you care. And as long as you care, there's always hope!

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...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice.
-Billy Joel
Terri
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9 posted 08-14-99 03:24 AM       View Profile for Terri   Email Terri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terri

Dear One,
Please remember, he is but one of many parts that make up the whole of You. I feel for you and the anguish you've expressed. Love yourself, love your children and you will fill that void.
Enough preaching....thank you for the touching poem!
~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA


10 posted 08-14-99 04:10 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you all very much!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


juanita
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since 08-13-99
Posts 68
Los Angeles, CA, USA


11 posted 08-14-99 04:25 AM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

My tears are streaming down my face, a deep corner of my heart, your poem touched, for great pain I have known and to your soul, a sister am I.
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


12 posted 08-14-99 07:04 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Well, dear sister, welcome to my happy family! I am so glad you enjoyed this piece.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


elvira
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since 07-06-99
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13 posted 08-14-99 08:49 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

love your self...and your heart will never be broken...that is the most important, and most precious love of all, in my opinion (for what it's worth)
~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA


14 posted 08-15-99 01:58 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you so much, elvira!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


tori
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since 06-18-99
Posts 521
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


15 posted 08-18-99 12:45 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

~One just getting here to find your other poem and wow.... this is great.. good job.. I think at sometime or the other all of us end here ... in mind or in reality... well done.. on my way..... cya
~one voice~
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Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


16 posted 08-19-99 04:58 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you, Tori! You're so sweet!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Sue
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since 08-04-99
Posts 407
France


17 posted 08-19-99 07:33 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

I know how you feel - that sort of loneliness is the hardest to bear. Keep writing - we are there for you.
Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
Posts 32119
Tamarac Fla


18 posted 08-19-99 09:28 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

One Voice,
I can only say love yourself
and you will find love every where.
 
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