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Sing me a Song Please

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-08-13 02:12 PM

sing me a song please,
time is not my lease,
im so glad your here,
so you can stop my tears,
im getting cold love,
dont try to stop the blood,
im done,im over,
just hold me a little while longer,
no beautiful i wont get stronger,
im through,
my windows are blue,
sadness is not new in my house,
you made it go away,
but its back today,
and brought death with it,
my wheels are slowing down,
visons blurred,
please say the words,
no sweetie i love you more,
so open the door,
let death through,
one day i promise it will be just me and you,
but for now,
i throw in the towel,
dont cry,
ill be back,
after death gets off my back,
cheer up find love,
wash your hands of my blood,
swear to me you will try,
before i die,
thank you,
you did all you could do,
but im through,
i always loved you

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poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-08-13 02:28 PM

....~~puddles around my keyboard~~ Oh man, this one is heavy....better dry this keyboard off before I get a zap...how sad...(nearly crying) I think this is the 1st piece of yours I've read...? Very interesting...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

2 posted 1999-08-14 04:26 PM

sad subject, but a nice poem...Welcome to the forums "The Jackal"

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