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This time, Alone...!!!

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moonmoon
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I walk through the woods
To where we once stood;
The winding narrow path
Which bore our footsteps..
The pine needles untouched
On your side of road
Your feet forlorn, since that day
We walked hand in hand..!

I stand by the river
The silence breaks my soul
The ripple of the water
The whisper of the wind
Smell of pine in the air
Birds singing without dare

I sit on the branch
-This time, alone..!
Thinking of the time
You hummed me your song...

This serenity is nostalgic
But I don't want to stay..
I remember, with you,
Desire to stay wouldn't sway...
Nothing has changed
But you are not here..
Without you by my side,
Nothing seems clear...!
© Copyright 1999 Luna Joseph - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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'Tis a bittersweet love song - Nicely done, and welcome to Passions....


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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ 1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75


moonmoon
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Thanks Nan...It means a lot to me...Especially coming from a pioneer like you...

Luna.

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within." Amelia E. Barr


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I liked this. Very sad though..made me think of fall with summer over and thoughts of winter alone....


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Thanks poet...

Well it WAS written in one of the winters of my life...(in the bleak mid-winter..*grin*)

So there goes...
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