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Letter: Trilogy to the man in front of me

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Poet deVine
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My apologies to the man in front of me
I had to take the very last seat you see
and now Iím sobbing, nay bawling
almost hysterically!

I canít believe you arenít touched
by the tragedy on the screen
the pathos and the heartache
are the most touching Iíve ever seen

I know my weeping annoys you
as you turn and try to shush me
I canít seem to stop this flow
I feel such pain for poor Bambi!
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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 08-13-99 01:48 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh good Lord, deViness....remind me never to go to the movies with you !! LOL BAMBI ??? Cute read though....

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"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Nicole
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LOL...I like!

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"Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain*
Tim
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Actually, Old Yeller always gets to me...
very nicely done Ms. deVine
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I've never seen anyone try to rhyme 'shush me' and 'Bambi' before! Very innovative, deVine one!
Poet deVine
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This was done on the fly (and he was wearing the pants at the time!)...LOL.....sorry....
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Very cute... and I mean that in the best of ways. :0
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well, i absolutely hate Disney (i know how un-american of me!) but enjoyed your poem deVine...i have friends who get all teary-eyed at the movies...i prefer to do that in the privacy of my home, and usually can check my calender when i shed tears over a movie
 
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