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Letter: Trilogy to the man in front of me
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Letter: Trilogy to the man in front of me |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
My apologies to the man in front of me I had to take the very last seat you see and now I’m sobbing, nay bawling almost hysterically! I can’t believe you aren’t touched by the tragedy on the screen the pathos and the heartache are the most touching I’ve ever seen I know my weeping annoys you as you turn and try to shush me I can’t seem to stop this flow I feel such pain for poor Bambi! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh good Lord, deViness....remind me never to go to the movies with you !! LOL BAMBI ??? Cute read though....  ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
LOL...I like!  ------------------ "Grief can take care of itself, but to get the full value of joy you must have somebody to divide it with." *Mark Twain* |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Actually, Old Yeller always gets to me... very nicely done Ms. deVine |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I've never seen anyone try to rhyme 'shush me' and 'Bambi' before! Very innovative, deVine one! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This was done on the fly (and he was wearing the pants at the time!)...LOL.....sorry.... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Very cute... and I mean that in the best of ways. :0 |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
well, i absolutely hate Disney (i know how un-american of me!) but enjoyed your poem deVine...i have friends who get all teary-eyed at the movies...i prefer to do that in the privacy of my home, and usually can check my calender when i shed tears over a movie |
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