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In Dreams

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~one voice~
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0 posted 08-13-99 04:12 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

I know I shall never have you, love.
The Fates may not allow it to be so.
Yet, I shall keep on searching up above
for something more than what it is I know.

It seems that I may never kiss your eyes.
I might not have the chance to see your smile.
Though, we can fool ourselves with lovely lies,
I cannot say we'll go that extra mile.

Alas, we find each other's kiss in dreams.
Such torture when we wake to find them gone.
And love may never be just what it seems.
Yet, somehow, love, for us, goes on and on.

In dreams I touch my lips to yours, my dear.
'Tis only in my dreams I feel you near.

©1999 Erin Solari


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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."




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~one voice~
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1 posted 08-13-99 01:42 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Did I write this sonnet correctly?

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


DreamEvil
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2 posted 08-13-99 03:53 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I would say that you wrote it very well. It expresses your thoughts and feelings clearly.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
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3 posted 08-13-99 04:02 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You did excellently, one voice. You are growing by leaps and bounds.
~one voice~
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4 posted 08-13-99 05:24 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you Dream! Thank you Balladeer! To receive such praise from the both of you is such a warm fuzzy!
Andrew Scott
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5 posted 08-13-99 05:30 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Dreams: A world where all is possible and where reality eventually takes root.
~one voice~
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6 posted 08-13-99 06:41 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I surely hope so, Mr. Scott. Thank you.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Alwye
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7 posted 08-13-99 09:57 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

this has a beautiful melancholy feel about it, one voice. I love it..

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood
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8 posted 08-13-99 11:39 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

So romantically well-written.
passing shadows
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beautiful but sort of sad too
 
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