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juanita
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0 posted 08-13-99 03:17 AM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

If my soul could cross the distance
that separates me from you
hand-in-hand, we could walk
and I could sing of my love
to you!
My song will whisper in your ear
of a love as infinite and as endless
as the majestic sea
where your soul and my own
could dream the impossible dream
Climbing the mountain
of my unfortunate fate
lamenting the cruelty of the destiny
that takes me from your love away
In the dusk of the evening
when the daylight painfully dies
I look out my window
contemplating in nature
a love so complete
my heart feels the dagger
of imminent despair
But I know
somewhere in the silvery rays
of the moon
your thoughts and my thoughts
at midnight will meet
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1 posted 08-13-99 03:30 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

Welcome to the forums, juanita
johnl
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2 posted 08-13-99 08:49 AM       View Profile for johnl   Email johnl   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for johnl

You so beautifully evoke the aching heart, separated across space and time, longing for reunion and renewal, knowing the possibilities of fate, anticipating the ultimate fusion into one. If you dont risk everything you stand to gain nothing!!
poetFemmeFatale
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3 posted 08-13-99 09:27 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Very nice content in this piece ! Really magical...welcome welcome!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

juanita
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4 posted 08-14-99 03:51 AM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

Thanks for your welcome and for you ff for your thoughtful encouragement!!!
 
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