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Twice the more

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 08-12-99 09:00 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Twice the more

I have you twice within my heart,
The younger and grown-up part,
One fascinates my eyes today
The other dreamy yesterday.

Your innocence warmed me through,
The childish trust that I knew.
And todays superintend,
God, I love them both, no end.

You are to me a real compound,
The inner and the latter bound,
The two of you that I adore
And in this way it's twice the more.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-12-99 09:18 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Great job!
To be at peace, one must first accept the balance of their two true selves!

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Where did I go wrong, I never needed this before,
I need a woman, to help me feel.
-Live-
Delores Hall
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2 posted 08-13-99 12:44 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Enjoyable poem.
Seymour Tabin
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Thank you both for the read and comments.
Drauntz
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4 posted 06-20-2007 06:55 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

so beautiful sir. It is so very beautiful. you always know  what you have.

enjoyed
teddymarvelle
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5 posted 08-28-2007 12:08 PM       View Profile for teddymarvelle   Email teddymarvelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teddymarvelle

wow i feel the same for my daughter ... even tho she is just blooming into woman hood... ... thank you for this
 
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