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A lonely little comma..:-(((

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 08-12-99 07:14 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I sit here all alone
why?
well, I did have my friends
but someone took them all away
and left me on my own..

I feel my friends
helped me make my point
they were with me all the time
helping me express my thoughts
but not always in words that rhyme

and now I'm here and all alone
not one of them is here
and so I sit so very quiet
shedding silent tears!

In loving memory of my friends: The Comma

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.




[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 08-12-99).]
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Craig
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1 posted 08-12-99 07:19 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


RainbowGirl

Comma's are best left well alone

L,O,L,

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Poet deVine
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2 posted 08-12-99 07:20 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I was in a coma once...is that the same?
RainbowGirl
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3 posted 08-12-99 07:23 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

ROFLMAO

Forgive my humour please...LOL...It is in good spirit (and I never once mentioned cognac)...I just can't help myself...I've lost it: totally...and so have you...Oh dear: smile, go away...ROFL

As I run for cover...

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 08-12-99).]
Christopher
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4 posted 08-12-99 09:04 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Dare i say...

Is the colon our friend?

(couldn't help the childish humor, since at heart I'm still a child!)

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Where did I go wrong, I never needed this before,
I need a woman, to help me feel.
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DeVine, didn't you mean period? I had a colon-oscopy once. Does that count? Nice going, Rainbow girl.
Terri
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Don't get me started on periods! (Sorry, couldn't help myself--gonna go stand in the corner now)
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Do not take the name 'colon' in vain as that is the hometown of our dearest Ron! Yes, he hails from Colon, Michigan! Who names these places anyway? What about Yellville, Arkansas? Wiggins, Mississippi? Sharon, Pennsylvania?
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