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The Door

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pusskatt
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since 07-22-99
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0 posted 08-12-99 05:22 AM       View Profile for pusskatt   Email pusskatt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pusskatt


A pinch and a caress
was all that was left

we loved
and we'd hate
had we sealed our fate?

You closed the door
and took the key
there wasn't any room
left for me

A child when we met
A child who is left
without you near
and who loves you so dear

You wanted more
Now I can see
but didn't you know
you could have had that
with me

You closed the door
now your gone
and we are left
to carry on

Farwell my love
I still love you more
How I wish
you never closed that door...
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Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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1 posted 08-12-99 11:16 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Very nice poem.
 
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