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pusskatt
Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 30
Austrralia

0 posted 1999-08-12 05:22 AM



A pinch and a caress
was all that was left

we loved
and we'd hate
had we sealed our fate?

You closed the door
and took the key
there wasn't any room
left for me

A child when we met
A child who is left
without you near
and who loves you so dear

You wanted more
Now I can see
but didn't you know
you could have had that
with me

You closed the door
now your gone
and we are left
to carry on

Farwell my love
I still love you more
How I wish
you never closed that door...

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Delores Hall
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342
USA
1 posted 1999-08-12 11:16 AM


Very nice poem.
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