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Rhiannon
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The wind blows a little slower
The voices talk a little lower
The face a little longer
The silence a little stronger
The heart a little swallowed
The morning a little hollowed
The sound is followed
To the fresh and empty grave.

to: Uncle Randy

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poetFemmeFatale
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Very powerful & descriptive to a T....absolutely sets the mood like the reader is there...very good use of words to evoke feelings...and your senses...

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"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Sue
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Evocative, recognisable, well written.
angel girl
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within a whisper...


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A few years ago, my little sister's best friend was hit by a car and killed. She was only eight years old. This really reminded me of her funeral. Very well written.

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

Rhiannon
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4 posted 08-12-99 11:41 AM       View Profile for Rhiannon   Email Rhiannon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rhiannon's Home Page   View IP for Rhiannon

Thank you very much for your kind words.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


5 posted 08-12-99 11:54 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Read in usual speed, thought provoking; read slowly, and it is heart wrenching. Very good work.

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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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