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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
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0 posted 1999-08-11 09:24 PM


I'm not brave enough
to reply to yours
there
but simply wanted to wish
You...
A hug; a wish; heaven's dream
all tied up
In what is meant for you...

It's clear to me
that you think hard
and post
with so much thought

This RainbowGirl
Says!
Be safe; be happy
and take great care
for you have the ability
to both care and share!

HUGS Craig




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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Craig
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since 1999-06-10
Posts 444

1 posted 1999-08-12 04:21 PM



What did I do to deserve this???


Regarding my bad ramble, and your eloquent reply
A fool am I, but happy, no need to ask me why
I talked unto a rainbow, with feline snoops in hand
Not trying to misjudge me, she just tried to understand
Bringing smiles where recently, smiles did not reside
Or hugs to lift this poor failing wordsmiths pride
Well take this as a hug, straight from a fools heart
Sent to you with rainbows, to decorate the start

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
2 posted 1999-08-12 04:38 PM


Honey....you can tie me up and have your way with me anytime?....LOL
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
3 posted 1999-08-12 06:44 PM


Ohhhhhhhhh....I don't know what to say and then I read down and I start to laugh...think I feel a rainbow coming on..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



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