How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #1 Archive
 Craig: You Two - critical forum; respons
 1 2 3
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Craig: You Two - critical forum; response

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 07-31-99
Posts 3167
United Kingdom


0 posted 08-11-99 09:24 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I'm not brave enough
to reply to yours
there
but simply wanted to wish
You...
A hug; a wish; heaven's dream
all tied up
In what is meant for you...

It's clear to me
that you think hard
and post
with so much thought

This RainbowGirl
Says!
Be safe; be happy
and take great care
for you have the ability
to both care and share!

HUGS Craig




------------------
You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Craig
Senior Member
since 06-10-99
Posts 882


1 posted 08-12-99 04:21 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


What did I do to deserve this???


Regarding my bad ramble, and your eloquent reply
A fool am I, but happy, no need to ask me why
I talked unto a rainbow, with feline snoops in hand
Not trying to misjudge me, she just tried to understand
Bringing smiles where recently, smiles did not reside
Or hugs to lift this poor failing wordsmiths pride
Well take this as a hug, straight from a fools heart
Sent to you with rainbows, to decorate the start
Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 07-29-99
Posts 5839
Ala bam a


2 posted 08-12-99 04:38 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Honey....you can tie me up and have your way with me anytime?....LOL
RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 07-31-99
Posts 3167
United Kingdom


3 posted 08-12-99 06:44 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Ohhhhhhhhh....I don't know what to say and then I read down and I start to laugh...think I feel a rainbow coming on..

HUGS

------------------
You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


RainbowGirl will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #1 >> Craig: You Two - critical forum; respons Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors