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Estrangement..

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Mark R.
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since 06-25-99
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0 posted 08-11-99 05:09 PM       View Profile for Mark R.   Email Mark R.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mark R.


Is it so necessary to be here,
So far from home, yet so near.
My thoughts aloud, wishing you to hear,
All about my terrors and my fears.

Wandering aimlessly towards nothingness
Betrayed only by my own loneliness.
Deny me not your sweet comfort now,
Indulge me with love instead of ciao.

Have faith in the happiness we found in
each other,
As the happiness found between you and
mother.

"Dear father, I need you back!"
For it is your guidance which I lack.....

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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


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Beautifully written Mark

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Delores Hall
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since 07-16-99
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I know that feeling,would do anything to
have my father back.Nicely written
poetFemmeFatale
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Very moving....touched my 'ol naughty heart...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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