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Open Poetry #1

Whispered Desires

JANNA
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 51
arlington, tx usa

0 posted 1999-08-11 04:33 PM

Eloquently she speaks of love
In dimly lit rooms
Candles a glow

She speaks a hushed whisper
Of a tender embrace
Bodies so close

Yearning has enveloped them
A passion so sweet
Yet never to be

She murmurs his name
Creating a memory
Together they keep.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 1999-08-11 07:26 PM

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-08-11 07:50 PM

Very nicely done...the format works wonders for this piece!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

JANNA
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 51
arlington, tx usa

3 posted 1999-08-11 09:49 PM

Thanks again, Hoot!

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-08-11 10:30 PM

Short, sweet, beautiful, powerful...

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

JANNA
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 51
arlington, tx usa

5 posted 1999-08-12 11:10 AM

Thanks Alwye!!! Your a wonderful poet, It honors me that you like my work...

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2002-02-11 07:09 PM

good stuff

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