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He Is With Me

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-11-99 04:09 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I remember when first I felt His love.
Revelation was just not on my mind.
It truly hit like a bolt from above.
To an empty life I had been resigned.

Exposed to Him was every nagging doubt.
He loved me despite my hatred and sin.
My feelings of despair were washed right out.
I knew that I would not be alone again.

I did not rail against the coming Light.
When He touched my heart I began to weep.
I cried for what I had lost to the Night.
He touched my heart and my fears went to sleep.

Now I know He walks by my side unseen.
He is Jesus, the blessed Nazarene.


©1999 DreamEvil

Just trying to stay versatile.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©




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Sundance
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1 posted 08-11-99 04:16 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

I love it! Very inspiring! Great Job!

Dragoness
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2 posted 08-11-99 04:54 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Well Done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
WhtDove
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3 posted 08-11-99 06:02 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Truly Awesome!!! Wow! I knew it wasn't gone.
Gentle Soul
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4 posted 08-11-99 06:43 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

DE.. I LOVE IT!! Im proud of you.. this poem I believe is yur best love.. *hugs* Smile.. I love it.. I really do.. lol.. did I mention that I really like it!!! WOW... hehe love ya!!

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Artur Hawkwing
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5 posted 08-11-99 07:32 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Fantastic ... Jesus has a way of calming fear, doesn't he? Good one, DE.
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 08-11-99 07:42 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Dream...very beautiful. Do you realize the demand for religious poetry out there??

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Nan
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7 posted 08-11-99 09:00 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Perhaps this belongs on the mainsite in the Spiritual Section??? Nice job, DE..

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Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done:
For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits,
Than I am sure I have in my whole five.
~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75


Alwye
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8 posted 08-11-99 09:51 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Great Job, Dream!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
JP
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9 posted 08-12-99 12:07 AM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

Very uplifting. Nice work.

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Dum spiro, spero
JP

Saxoness
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10 posted 08-12-99 12:14 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

My absolute favorite yet.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


angel girl
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within a whisper...


11 posted 08-12-99 04:41 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Loved it. Very good

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

angel girl
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12 posted 08-12-99 04:42 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Very good. Loved it

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

~one voice~
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13 posted 08-12-99 08:28 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Dream, I am in awe. Once again, you've made me a poet without words. Marvelous work, love, and go on embracing that light and let it shine.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


DreamEvil
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14 posted 08-12-99 02:31 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I hadn't realized there was any demand at all for spiritual poetry.

Perhaps I will submit this one to the main site, it seems to be more than popular. I don't think that popularity is why I should write though. Like most of my stuff, this one flowed easily. Incontrast, my next piece was very difficult to write.

Thank you for the support of this piece, it means much.
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