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For Dream Evil

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WhtDove
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0 posted 08-11-99 03:09 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I know my rhyme might suck...but it's the thought that counts.

Women are not all the same
We don't all play this evil game.

There is nothing they can gain
By causing you so much pain.

I know your down and feeling blue
We've all been there a time or two.

I'm sorry for the pain you feel
I know the hurt is very real.

There are no words that I can say
To make your pain all go away.

But there is one thing I know
It is from pain that we do grow.

It helps us grow to be more strong
And learn from things that have gone wrong.

Just want to let you know I'm here
And that for you I do care.

Compassion and an ear I'll lend
Because you have become my friend.

You have been there for so many others
And drawn them from the dark that covers.

So if I may I will be there
To shed some light or just a tear.

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 08-11-99).]
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blueloon
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1 posted 08-11-99 03:11 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

I hope that Dream reads this soon, this is the nicest poem that I have read to a fellow member...you are so sweet Whtdove!
blueloon

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 08-11-99 03:13 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

I'm sure Dream Evil will love the poem. Well done.
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3 posted 08-11-99 08:04 PM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

This was beautifully written WhtDove.. I hope that this brings him out of his bad mood.. Thank you for sharing this piece..

Love,
Lady

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Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


WhtDove
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4 posted 08-11-99 09:15 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you all. But I really did not put it here for replies. I just wish he'd talk to someone. But thanks!
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5 posted 08-12-99 02:21 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

That was quite a shock. First seeing it, then reading it, my humility just took an interesting turn. Thank you WhtDove, I know that not all women are the same. Unfortunately, most of those I have encountered are exactly the same. Had I given up, I would not be posting or forming relationships with women still.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


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