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My sailor - My sun

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 08-11-99 12:36 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I finally find
a match to fit
my checklist in
Romance...
He's everything
I want & need
except he does
not dance !!
Now how can I
convince him that
he needs me in
his life ?
He's always stood
so strong alone -
his past contains
his strife...
I'm convinced that
he's my savior -
the sailor for
my sea...
He's the lighthouse
on my shoreline
that beckons, calls
to me.
For years I've raged
and tossed & churned -
my tide out of
control...
I've damaged all
within my wake
for this I pay
with soul.
I promise not
to hurt this man
he brings peace to
my storm.
He shines on me
my waters calm -
I sparkle with
sun, warm....


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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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Sue
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1 posted 08-11-99 01:37 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Good luck to you! I dream, too.
Craig
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2 posted 08-11-99 01:38 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


Excellent Poem, the content was well thought out and brilliantly executed.

Well done
WhtDove
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3 posted 08-11-99 03:28 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Great work! I loved it!
Balladeer
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4 posted 08-11-99 04:44 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Femme, this is wonderful work. The scheme is good, the flow great and the words and meaning clear. That vacation was good, huh?

Severn
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5 posted 08-11-99 06:18 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hey you! Where ya been? Lovely, lovely poem - I hope that was a true account for you!?
Nice to read your work again.

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'Only the shallow know themselves.' Oscar Wilde.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 08-11-99 07:09 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Agree with Balladeer, wonderful work Big TU.
poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 08-11-99 07:12 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Thanks all for the nice replies - Balladeer, I had a great vacation...of course (wink)...Severn, so nice to hear from you again too! Been on a vacation to the ocean to get some inspiration for my writing...and to relax...but I'm back & stronger than ever! Read my new stuff in Adult, I think you'll approve! Thanks everyone for keeping my spirits up and my faith strong ! Love you all !

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 08-11-99 07:53 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice one poet

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Alwye
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In the space between moments


9 posted 08-11-99 10:36 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful, nicely executed. Good luck!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
JP
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10 posted 08-12-99 12:05 AM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

Yep, this one gets smile and gentle nod. Very well done.

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Dum spiro, spero
JP

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on the threshold of a dream


11 posted 08-12-99 09:03 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this very much!!! And if you find a way to persuade your sunshine that he needs you, too... would you share your secret? *G*
poetFemmeFatale
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12 posted 08-12-99 10:10 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

You bet Suthern....what is it about men that they don't NEED us.....I want someone that NEEDS me - you know, not hanging on me all the time as if incapible, but it's nice to know they gotta have you....! (pulling my hair out in frustration)

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

ac
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13 posted 08-12-99 02:25 PM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

i couldn't agree with you more...it's not that men have to become excruciatingly needy that they need you to match their socks... but it sure is nice to know that they couldn't live without your love...great poem...
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


14 posted 08-12-99 02:57 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Well done, pff!
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