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ac
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0 posted 08-11-99 10:44 AM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ac


i know the time will come,
when i get a chance to light up your world...
when you get a chance,
to change mine...

quite bluntly...
i need you to feed my mind,
to enlighten my soul...
giving meaning to life,
and all that i know...

i need your eyes...
on me,
in me,
penetrating...
through me,
the core of your soul surrounding me,
while it comforts me and holds me...

reaching the truth of my essence,
and far beyond the boundaries of my presence...

so in response to all your questions,
your fears,
your doubts,
your needs...
as long as you can love me too,
my love will fulfill your dreams...
© Copyright 1999 ac - All Rights Reserved
Delores Hall
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1 posted 08-11-99 11:21 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Very nice poem.I enjoyed it.
ac
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Thank you Delores...
Seymour Tabin
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AC, enjoyed the read, the best of luck.
ac
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4 posted 08-11-99 04:30 PM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

Thanks...
Balladeer
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After the third read, I began to see the depth of this poem. If we could only find someone to take the time to look inside.....
I like the sincerity of this poem very much.
ac
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6 posted 08-11-99 05:00 PM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

Balladeer...i'm much flattered...thank you so much...it's really just a plea to have him really look at me...afterall, it's so hard to let just anyone see...

[This message has been edited by ac (edited 08-11-99).]
hoot_owl_rn
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ac....this poem was well written, there is a flow to it that makes the poem work well. It says a lot and almost taunts the reader to grasp it's meaning.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
ac
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Thanks much hoot_owl_rn i'm glad you enjoyed, your comment is very much appreciated...
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