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Lady Fair- re-write

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Dragoness
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0 posted 08-11-99 04:52 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Lady Fair

I want to calm your fears
To dry all your tears
Holding you tight
All through the night

Enfold you in my leather wings
Listen to your heart as it sings
Lay my talons upon your hair
Yes, for you my Lady Fair

All the night will hear our Whispers
No, My love you'll not need those Slippers
A silken bower for you awaits
Come my love lets test the fates

Your hand in mine
For all told time
Let the world watch and stare
Yes, for you my Lady Fair

I want to feast on your untold beauty
I want to touch your silken nudity
Holding you gently my love
My touches like that of a Dove

Come the morning you will see
That only I am your destiny
Leave all you troubles, have no care
Only for you my Lady Fair

Once more the nights for us unfold
I'll teach you of treasures still untold
We will make a loving pair
Just for you my Lady Fair

So come to me, take my hand
Come join in this distant land
To my castle high in the air
Just you and I, My Lady Fair



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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
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angel girl
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1 posted 08-11-99 05:27 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

This was so sweet, I wanted to cry. If only all men were like that.

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

angel girl
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2 posted 08-11-99 05:28 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

This was so sweet, I wanted to cry. If only all men were like that.

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

Saxoness
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3 posted 08-11-99 11:10 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Very nice Dragoness, I always enjoy your work. Keep it up. :-)

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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4 posted 08-11-99 12:26 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

YAY! I like it Dragoness..

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Dragoness
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5 posted 08-12-99 09:07 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Thank-You Ladies.I was hoping the re-write would be an improvement.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
 
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