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I Know I Can't Have You

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JANNA
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0 posted 08-11-99 01:44 AM       View Profile for JANNA   Email JANNA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JANNA

I fear I am falling
I fear of my love for you
I fear I need you in me
I fear you complete me

Give me one moment
To hold you so close
Give me forever
I'm losing control

I'm burning inside
With this feeling oh God
Help me from taking
This disasterous plunge

I'm shaking with pleasure
I'm aching with need
I'm pleading for solace
I'm dying to flee

From your embrace
It's you that I fear
I need to remember
That your nowhere near

But I hear your voice
I listen and I fall
I think of a future
But only a wall

It's you that I want
It's you in my dreams
It's you that I see
Together with me

But all is such pain
To know it's not you
To know never at all
I will hold you in my arms
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angel girl
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1 posted 08-11-99 05:59 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

I know where you are coming from. I'm feeling that same pain right now, and it hurts like Hell.
angel girl
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2 posted 08-11-99 06:01 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

I know where you are coming from. I'm feeling that same pain right now, and it hurts like Hell.
JANNA
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3 posted 08-11-99 09:27 AM       View Profile for JANNA   Email JANNA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JANNA

I wrote this partly from past experience partly from fiction, but that feeling can be the worst ever...knowing youu can't have the one person you really want. Thank you for your feedback Angel Girl!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 08-11-99 08:19 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This poem makes a strong impact on the reader

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
JANNA
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5 posted 08-11-99 09:45 PM       View Profile for JANNA   Email JANNA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JANNA

Great thats what i wanted to do...this is a strong emotion...thanks Hoot for your comment!!!
angel girl
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6 posted 08-12-99 05:45 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Anytime.

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

 
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