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Capulet[R+J]
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Calgary,Alberta Canada


0 posted 08-10-99 04:36 PM       View Profile for Capulet[R+J]   Email Capulet[R+J]   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Capulet[R+J]'s Home Page   View IP for Capulet[R+J]


Hello.. I wrote this at 3:am this morning while I couldn't sleep.

In the dead of night I lay awake, to the
whispers of the dark, and find myself
a lonly soul, in the sadness of my heart.
I feel the touch of the unborn light
and wish upon a star, to heal wounds of
a lost embrace, of a love that leaves
the scars.
In whistful thoughts I remember touch,
of your fingers on my skin, and shivers
pass throughout my soul to hold you
once again.
I fear forever what I lost was true, your
warm and sweet embrace. To no longer
hear your words of love, to never see
your face.
I bow my head and pray to God, to take
away the pain, in this dead of night I
lay awake, and cry my tears in vain.
Forever in time will show me love again
in someone new, but my fears are not to
love again, but that I will not love them
as I truely love you.

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Love can be searched for in Infinity, Found within Eternity,.. Lost within Seconds..
© Copyright 1999 Capulet[R+J] - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 06-16-99
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In the space between moments


1 posted 08-10-99 04:43 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, wonderful...so deeply sad..I especially liked the line "I feel the touch of the unborn light"..excellent work, Capulet.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
Dragoness
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since 08-07-99
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2 posted 08-10-99 11:29 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

WOW! Well done!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
Balladeer
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since 06-05-99
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3 posted 08-11-99 12:00 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

The last line is especially poignant. Very well written
Capulet[R+J]
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Calgary,Alberta Canada


4 posted 08-11-99 02:57 PM       View Profile for Capulet[R+J]   Email Capulet[R+J]   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Capulet[R+J]'s Home Page   View IP for Capulet[R+J]


Thankyou for all your kind words
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


5 posted 08-11-99 08:08 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautifully done...and I have been meaning to say, I love the name!!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
angel girl
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since 07-23-99
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within a whisper...


6 posted 08-12-99 07:41 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Lovely.

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One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

zipknee
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since 07-28-99
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Oak Park, IL


7 posted 08-12-99 11:21 AM       View Profile for zipknee   Email zipknee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for zipknee

wow, i often am awake at night thinking the same thoughts but not quite as eloquently. it was a very beautiful poem.
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


8 posted 08-12-99 11:27 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

And you know that even if the pain ever eases, the magic can never be recaptured... I like this!
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