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Spite- written in a fit of release.

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 08-10-99 02:35 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I hate my life
for the mess
it's made of me
and it's strife.

Despair
is my song
the only tune I know
yet it comes out wrong.

Casual words
bleed a chorus
of unconcern
that ignores my need.

Needing compassion,
I am struck
by the force
of her dispassion.

Once in my heart,
how she did leave
is where this story
does start.

She told me today
for three years
she has lied to me
in every way.

I ask for concern
yet each of
my efforts she
does constantly spurn.

Again today
I discovered why men
are violent to women,
the reason is uncovered.

They try to provoke
such a reaction
then quietly smile
at the heart they broke.

All women are the same
is what I
don't want to believe,
feeling so is my shame.

Is someone there for me,
a Lady who
will soothe my Beast
and not ignore my sanity?


©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©




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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 08-10-99 03:10 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wow, I read this once, and had to read it again...such really deep emotions in this piece. All women are not the same...unfortunately, you got a taste of the BAD kind...the kind that only think of themselves. Humans hurt eachother for only one reason...selfishness - in some form or another. Keep looking up and you will find that someone who will love you truly... Great work!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Alwye
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In the space between moments


2 posted 08-10-99 03:38 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I also had to read this more than once, Dream. So much raw emotion...yes, you've seen the bad kind of women...I despise them too, as most of the halfway good women do. We aren't all like this. Excellent work, my friend, as always.

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy
Dragoness
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3 posted 08-10-99 11:38 PM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

There are women who love and women who hurt.You've looked in the wrong places love.The good ones are out there.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
Gentle Soul
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4 posted 08-11-99 12:03 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

I agree with Dragoness...
*hugs* love ya brother

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5 posted 08-11-99 01:15 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

This piece sits badly with me. But it's good work.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Severn
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6 posted 08-11-99 01:28 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Oh dear, hurt is a universal thing. We women can be such cows, sometimes. The flip side to be the only species that can think and create beyond survivalist instinct is our awful capacity to hurt others. But of course - we can love too! Don't give up. Hey - you write great poetry, that's got to be a comfort right?
WhtDove
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7 posted 08-11-99 10:54 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I'm sorry your hurting in such a way,
The right one will come along some day.

Not all woman are the same...some may hurt intentionally, but they say we hurt the ones closest to us. It only hurts worse cause we feel so deep to the ones we love..
Hang in there Dream! Keep chaneling through your words!
Sunshine
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8 posted 08-11-99 11:09 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ah Dream, set the bad ones free and close your eyes, the goods ones will come much to your surprise.

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© KRJ
Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

~one voice~
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9 posted 08-11-99 01:54 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I am so sorry that you are hurting so badly. I wish you were here to talk about it. I miss you... Good work, excellent.

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


DreamEvil
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10 posted 08-11-99 04:04 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you, everyone for the words of encouragement, but my past and present experiences with women make what you say very hard to believe. With friends and more like you, I will always try to keep an open mind.
Poet deVine
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11 posted 08-11-99 09:08 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I think you should become a monk. Live in a monastery that prohibits talking and will not allow you to have writing materials! (Do you feel better with *that* as an alternative?)

If I had a quarter for every time I felt this way about men, I'd be wealthy! We take from life what we put into it! Smile and move on!
DreamEvil
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12 posted 08-12-99 02:17 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Here's the smile.

I have moved on, just every once in awhile, the past haunts me.
RainbowGirl
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13 posted 08-12-99 02:56 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

You have to have a little faith...I'm not sure it's about either women or men but more to do with how each of us actually feel and show our care...if our attitudes on that don't fit, chances are, the couple in the relationship won't either...but sometimes we have to leave in order to know what we lost or gained...depending on your point of view..

But take heart, there are other's whose future haunts them, rather than their past....well, that all sounds depressing and it wasn't meant to be at all...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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