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i never knew

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chris
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since 06-23-99
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rowlett, texas, usa


0 posted 08-10-99 01:15 PM       View Profile for chris   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chris

wading through the dreams
that fell before my eyes.
the love that you had given
was just a big disguise
you lied when you said you'd love me
until the end of time
you were the one i dreamed of
to hold you as my wife

but you turned your back and walked away
you were laughing as you said good-bye
as you close the door on yesterday
i knew it was all a lie
the love that i had in front of me
i never knew that it wasn't right
you lied to me... in spite of it all
and left me holding on through the night

now days they pass, there's nothing here
i won't let anybody near
look what you've done
you left this shell
and gave me my life in hell....
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Severn
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1 posted 08-11-99 01:46 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

How sad, very well expressed though. I hope life is happier now.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


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very sad

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
passing shadows
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ouch
 
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