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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 08-10-99 12:27 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Meow

Once when prudence turned to foolish
A change touched issue to my brow
A wily blow was brought to bear
On the vent of some cats meow.

The obvious of lain once lamb.
Rose up to be a Lions' roar.
And the subtle sword of cunning
Cut chaos on my Cupid's door.

Chivalry died and bellied up
Sensitivity ceased a spell.
Jealousy that shapeless monster
Opened a crack the doors of hell.

And the barb found the hearts tender
Driven in by a selfish floor.
By the prick of a subtle doubt
But strong enough to kill amour.

And the cat raised its tail in spae
Purred, turned its back and walked away.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
blueloon
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1 posted 08-10-99 12:33 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

Seymour!! you made me miss my devilish little kitten that I had to give away. I loved your poem.
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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 08-10-99 03:46 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sorry about that, Thanks for the read and comment.
Sue
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3 posted 08-11-99 02:27 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

"Jealousy that shapeless monster" Monster indeed, jealousy is probably the worst thing that can happen to a relationship. Loved the poem.
elvira
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4 posted 08-11-99 04:49 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

that's why i only have female kitties
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 08-11-99 10:22 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Thank you Sue and Elvira Love to get comments on my poems.
Nan
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6 posted 08-11-99 01:32 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hm.... Just when my temporary cat has moved out....


[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 08-11-99).]
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 08-11-99 04:33 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan, that is a provocative statment!!!!
What kind of a cat were you talking about????
Drauntz
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8 posted 06-20-2007 04:59 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

beautiful and interesting.

beautiful and I love the ending.

enjoyed.
Artic Wind
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9 posted 11-10-2007 09:43 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

i love cats

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